Not as good as it could be, I think. But I'm a quick learner.
[she still can't zero in on the shadows' rapidly shifting elements when there are too many swarming at once, after all - the one moment where every advantage is absolutely critical. with her inexperience and expanded 'sight' it's easy to become overwhelmed by the flurry of action. that's no excuse, however, and something she's determined to improve upon.
in the meantime, she thinks that she ought to make Sakuma aware of it at the very least. those who couldn't see the way Reimi could now didn't seem to be aware of the rats' fluctuating states, and that would only lead to recklessness and frustration.]
They keep jumbling around what their weaknesses are as they fight. It's hard for me to pick out when there's a big crowd of them, but-
[but when they're thinned like this, it was fine. and it was something to keep in mind regardless of foe number.]
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[she still can't zero in on the shadows' rapidly shifting elements when there are too many swarming at once, after all - the one moment where every advantage is absolutely critical. with her inexperience and expanded 'sight' it's easy to become overwhelmed by the flurry of action. that's no excuse, however, and something she's determined to improve upon.
in the meantime, she thinks that she ought to make Sakuma aware of it at the very least. those who couldn't see the way Reimi could now didn't seem to be aware of the rats' fluctuating states, and that would only lead to recklessness and frustration.]
They keep jumbling around what their weaknesses are as they fight. It's hard for me to pick out when there's a big crowd of them, but-
[but when they're thinned like this, it was fine. and it was something to keep in mind regardless of foe number.]